醫(yī)藥論文英文摘要中的常見錯誤與評改

[關(guān)鍵詞] 醫(yī)藥 論文 英文摘要

健康網(wǎng)訊:

  1、醫(yī)藥科技工作者撰寫醫(yī)藥論文時一般要求附英文摘要，英文摘要寫得準(zhǔn)確與



否，很大程度上體現(xiàn)了作者的學(xué)術(shù)水平，也與論文的影響力有很大關(guān)系。我們有幸



從《醫(yī)藥導(dǎo)報》雜志社獲取了相當(dāng)數(shù)量論文的英文摘要原稿。該刊特邀英文校譯—



—同華中科技大學(xué)同濟(jì)醫(yī)學(xué)院馮新為教授，年逾九旬仍伏案筆耕，為這些稿件做了



大量細(xì)致深入的校譯工作，可謂句句汗水字字珠璣。給醫(yī)藥科技論文英文摘要的寫



作提供了一個范本，對廣大醫(yī)藥科技工作者來說也是一次極其珍貴的學(xué)習(xí)機(jī)會。本



刊特輯錄刊載其原文及馮教授所作修正、點評，以饗讀者。



   2、編制體例：本文按照原文、修正、點評次序編寫；修改、插入處以黑體斜體



，刪節(jié)處附括號說明，如有點評附上標(biāo)數(shù)字注明。







1、 原文：



Determination of Gallic Acid in Zhixueting Liquids by TLC Scanning



ZHOU Qun1, XU La-ying2 (1. Department of Pharmacology, Tongji Medical C



ollege, Huazhong University of Science and Technology, Wuhan 430030, Ch



ina; 2.The Faculty of Pharmacy, Hubei College of Traditional Chinese Me



dicine, Wuhan 430061,China)



ABSTRACT Objective: To determine the content of gallic acid in Zhixueti



ng liquids. Methods: Zhixueting liquids were dissolved by distilled wat



er, and then extracted into the sample with butanal etc. The samples we



re determinated by TLC scanning (λS=280nm,λR=350nm). Result: The aver



age recovery rate was 96.36% and RSD=2.39%. The contents of gallic acid



 in 3 five batches of samples were 0.38,0.42 and 0.47mg/ml. Conclusion:



 The method is simple, convenient and available.



KEY WORDS TLC Scanning; Zhixueting liquids; Determination; Gallic acid



修正：



Determination of Gallic Acid in Chuxueting1 oral Liquids by TLC Scannin



g



ZHOU Qun1, XU La-ying2 (1. School of Pharmacy2, Tongji Medical College,



 Huazhong University of Science and Technology, Wuhan 430030, China; 2.



The Faculty of Pharmacy, Hubei College of Traditional Chinese Medicine,



 Wuhan 430061,China)



Abstract Objective: To determine the content of gallic acid in Chuxueti



ng oral Liquids. Methods: The Chuxueting oral Liquid was dissolved in d



istilled water, and then extracted （into the sample刪去） with water-s



aturaled n-butanol3 etc. for the preparation of samples. The samples we



re subjected to gallic acid determination by TLC scanning (λS=280nm,λ



R=350nm). Results: The average rate of recovery was 96.36%,（and刪去） 



RSD=2.39%. The contents of gallic acid in 3 （five刪去） batches of sam



ples were 0.38,0.42 and 0.47mg/ml respectively. Conclusion: The method 



is simple, convenient and feasible.



KEY WORDS TLC Scanning; Chuxueting oral Liquids; Determination; Gallic 



acid



點評：



1、zhixueting 應(yīng)為“止血�！倍�非“出血�！保�自相矛盾�！俺鲅��！币部勺g為



hemorrhage-stopping，以方便國外讀者理解。



2、school可作“（大學(xué)里的）院”解，原意是“藥學(xué)院”，而非“藥理教研室”



，故改之。



3、斜體n表示“正”。







2、原文：



Content Determination of Emodin in Qingre Mingmu Capsules



LUO Ming-zhu1, ZHANG Hong2 (1.Hubei Provice Institute of Drug Control, 



Wuhan 430030, China; 2.The 75310 Medical Team of the Army)



ABSTRACT Objectives: To determination content of Emodin in Qingre Mingm



u Capsules. Methods: Tlcs was used, silica gel Tlc plate, developing so



lvent was Benzene-Ethyl fermate-formic acid-Methanol-water(3:1:0.05:0.1



:0.5) of which the upper solutionλS=435nm,λR=530nm. Result: The linea



r relationship of sample application which ranged between 0.168-3.09μg



 was good. The regression equation was below: Y=105417.7X-1115.6, r=0.9



995; arerage recovery was 100.53%, RSD=3.38%. Conclusion: This method i



s simple, accurate and convenient.



KEY WORDS TLcs; Qingre ming mu Ccapsules; Emodin



修正：



Determination of Emodin Content in Qingremingmu1 Capsules



LUO Ming-zhu1, ZHANG Hong2 (1.Hubei Provicial Institute of Drug Control



, Wuhan 430030, China; 2.The 75310 Medical Team of the Army)



ABSTRACT Objective: To set up a method for the determination （content刪



去） of Emodin content in Qingre Mingmu Capsules. Methods: In the TLC a



ssay, a 0.5% canboxymethyl cellulose sodium (was used刪去) silica gel G



 plate and a developing solvent with a mixture of benzene—ethyl format



e—formic acid—methanol—water(3:1:0.05:0.1:0.5) as the upper solution



 were used.λS=435nm,λR=530nm. Results: A good linear relationship was



 found when the sample amount (which刪去) ranged between 0.168-3.09μg 



（was good刪去）. The regression equation was as follows: Y=105417.7X-1



115.6, r=0.9995.The average rate of recovery was 100.53%, RSD=3.38%. Co



nclusion: The method is simple, convenient and accurate.



KEY WORDS TLC; Qingre Mingmu Ccapsules; Emodin



點評：



1、中成藥名用斜體書寫，也可譯作removing pathogenic heat to improve acui



ty of vision。







3、原文：



Research on The Acute Toxicity of Huning Capsule



XIN Zhi-wei, ZANG Zhi-he, MAI Xiao-xia, FENG Jun, YANG Wan-qing, LIAO H



ong-li (Teaching and Research Section of Pharmacy, The Third Medical Un



iversity, Chengdu College of PLA 610081, China)



ABSTRACT Objective: To observe and test the acute toxicity of Huning Ca



psule on Kunming mice after an i.g. Methods: Count the death cases of m



ice in 7 days after the i.g. and work out the LD50 of Huning Capsule. R



esults: The LD50 of Huning Capsule on mice is 3981mg/kg.



KEY WORDS Huning Capsule; Acute Toxicity; LD50



修正：



An Experimental Study of the Acute Toxicity of Huning Capsules1



XIN Zhi-wei, ZANG Zhi-he, MAI Xiao-xia, FENG Jun, YANG Wan-qing, LIAO H



ong-li (Teaching and Research Section of Pharmacy, Chengdu Military Med



ical College, The Third Military Medical University, Chengdu 610081, Ch



ina)



ABSTRACT Objective: To observe and determine the acute toxicity of Huni



ng capsules (on Kunming mice刪去) after a single intragastric administr



ation in the mouse. Methods: 50 Kunming mice were randomly divided into



 5 equal groups, with 10 animals in each group. A single dose of 7500, 



5630, 4200, 3150 and 2360mg/kg-1 of the content of the capsules were ad



ministened through a gastric tube to each of the mice of the 5 groups, 



respectively. The numbers of the deaths of the mice within 7 days were 



noted down and the mediar lether dose (LD50) of Huning Capsules was cal



culated. (Count the death cases of mice in 7 days after the i.g. and wo



rk out the LD50 of Huning Capsule. 刪去) Results: The LD50 of Huning Ca



psule in mice was 3981mg/kg. Conclusion: Huning Capsules have only a mi



nor acute toxicity. It is therefore safe to use the drug clinically. Fu



rther study of its toxicity in long-term application is required.



KEY WORDS Huning Capsules; Toxicity, acute; LD50



點評：



1、“呼寧膠囊”也可譯作antitussive and antiasthmatic capsules.







 

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